Nice flow, and good selection of beat. However, I felt like the hook should of been a little harder. The verse was straight and it painted the song as a concept of someone taking out a female on a night and she's down for anything (exciting emotion), then the hook brings the listener to a down moment (sad emotion). Just the inconsistency of emotions in the song leaves the listener confused about the concept of the song. This song has great potential with a little tweaking. Not.
The track sound good to the ear for the most part but there were moments of the direction an concept of the song were u got lost the talent is there but some home craft season on writing songs and concepts an it will all come together for this upcoming artist. Good luck!!!
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Hot!! Chi Town reppin dat boa MJ!! ♥♡♥·♥·
hot new artist
It's a cool track
Hot Track! Nice flow ....
decent
Is this titled "U'm Slapped" or "I'm Slapped" some hooks say it way some the other. Not!!!
Nice flow, and good selection of beat. However, I felt like the hook should of been a little harder. The verse was straight and it painted the song as a concept of someone taking out a female on a night and she's down for anything (exciting emotion), then the hook brings the listener to a down moment (sad emotion). Just the inconsistency of emotions in the song leaves the listener confused about the concept of the song. This song has great potential with a little tweaking. Not.
The track sound good to the ear for the most part but there were moments of the direction an concept of the song were u got lost the talent is there but some home craft season on writing songs and concepts an it will all come together for this upcoming artist. Good luck!!!
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